MatrixTamer
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I like Gundam SEED. Can you tell?
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Post by MatrixTamer on Aug 10, 2007 14:24:15 GMT -5
Your first fanfic fails and isn't complete. So what do you do? You start posting ANOTHER?
Seriously. Work on your writing, and try to improve one idea, instead of mass producing bad ideas.
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Post by Elec on Aug 10, 2007 16:21:11 GMT -5
Hey woah woah. You are way out of line! If you ever insult someone like that again I will not hesitate to ban you!
She was just voicing her opinion. It's hard to not give an opinion if you don't read the story. She couldn't judge your writing unless she read it. What she did is called constructive criticism. Read it and improve your writing otherwise no one is gonna want to read your stories. And you don't need to cuss out a critic.
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MatrixTamer
Adult
I like Gundam SEED. Can you tell?
Posts: 161
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Post by MatrixTamer on Aug 10, 2007 18:41:30 GMT -5
I'm sorry for sounding harsh, but if you're not going to improve as a writer, there's no point in you taking up more fics. I realize this one came first, and that you're not abandoning the first, and THAT'S the problem. If you're already under par with your writing, you should focus your efforts on improving with your first fic, and not be making a bunch more that equally fail. Your grammar is horrible. Your actions are not descriptive enough. Your dialogue is too frequent (so much so that it makes the fic look more like a script), and your characters are shallow and stereotypical. Sorry, but that's the truth.
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