Lily's Poetry

[Lilymon]

Hey guys, i got a lot of poems and songs, and nothing to do with them, so if it's okay with everyone, i'm gonna post em here. be very brutal with the feedback.


here's one i wrote when i was learning about the Holocaust at school. its about the survivors.



We Are The Survivors

We have seen it all
We've watched so many fall
So many have lost their lives
We are the Survivors.

So many hearts have stilled
So much blood's been spilled
We've heard too many cries
We are the Survivors.


its not much, and it isn't finished yet, but i like it a lot and i hope you guys do too

[Deji]

Very good for a start. A little flow trouble in the first few lines but other than that, it looks good. Can't wait to see the end!

[Lilymon]

thanks. :-) i've noticed that a good number of my poems have something to do with time. here's my favorite time poem.



Threads of Time

The Threads of Time
Go ticking by.
I look at the clock
But Time doesn't fly.
I glance away
And it all is gone.
Now it seems to have been so long
Since the day that i thought i had Time.
They say Time flies
When you're having fun,
But Time slows down
When you need it to run.
The clock is cruel
To those in need.
And now i see
That it was true, indeed,
That i was lost when i thought i had Time.


It started out as a concrete poem for my English class, but i couldn't get it in the shape of a clock on here, so this format will just have to do.

[Lilymon]

Dying but never dead
Not moving though i tread
I feel my life is going nowhere
Because it is nowhere that i am

Breathing out but never in
Always loss without a win
Never getting anywhere
Because no one understands

It's only you who makes me smile
Though i suffer through every trial
When i'm with you i know i'm somewhere
I want to stand where you stand

Wandering through the night
Always lost with rigid fright
I wonder if you will ever be there
When i need you to hold my hand

I try to find myself in me
I try to find my sight to see
I cower from the icy glare
Too harsh are Its demands

You make everything better
I can't care about the weather
Because when i stand beside you there
You've shown me who i am

Is there any hope for me
To find exactly who i need to be
Will you promise to take me somewhere
And show me where you stand

Can we ever be together
I want to be with you forever
Will you promise not to leave me nowhere
When i ask to hold your hand

[Novaspace]

Really good!

[Lilymon]

thanks!!


more coming soon!!!!

[Lilymon]

okay.... so i guess no one wants to post on here anymore. but i will cuz i got a lot of new poems.



here's one i worte when i was going through a difficult time with someone. enjoy


Lost

Food has lost its flavor
Water has lost its quench
Nothing has a savor
All because my heart was wrenched
Sleep has lost its slumber
I'm awake but not aware
Nothing seems to matter anymore
All because you didn't care
Nothing makes me laugh
I can never crac a smile
Everything seems so bland, so tasteless
Inches seem to stretch for miles
Love has lost its glow
Sparks have lost their fire
My blood has lost its flow
Because you were my desire
The sun has lost its light
Song has lost its sound
The dark has lost the night
Because you made me fall to the ground
Our kiss has lost its meaning
All because you had to leave
Color has lost its vibrancy
Because you left me on my knees

[Lilymon]

Fighting
If it's true that what doesn't Kill you
Only makes you Stronger,
Why do i feel like I Can't Go On
Or Live for any Longer?
I've Pressed Hard On to Win this Fight
To win a Battle, a War
For doing what is Right
For Peace and Faith and Love that's true
But now I see that all along
I was Fighting For You.
I Bleed red Blood
And I Cry hot Tears
I have never stopped Fighting
Throughout all of these years
I once as left so in the dark
But you found me and I found my heart
But now it just Seems that I Don't Know what to do
Because all of this Time I have Never Fought
For Anything But You

[rain]

Nice, you have gift. You could make some money by selling your poems in book store or somwehrere. collect them in book and start making millions. You could.... make some digimon relared poems, and sell em to company that makes digimons.... they could use these as words for songs....

sorry if my english usage wasnt 100% correct, it's not my first language.

[Lilymon]

what is your first language? and these aren't even the better poems. my problem is if i have an idea for a poem i have to write it down as soon as i think of it or else i forget and never remember.....and after it's written i have to read it OVER and OVER before i have it comitted to memory. I can't recite most of my poems without looking at them first.

[rain]

My first language is Estonian.

[Lilymon]

aw sweet. thats cool (well i think so anyway). i have an unusual fascination with foriegn languages. there are so many i'm going to learn when i get to college. i'm currently in a Spanish class at my high school. maybe i'll write a poem in Spanish soon....i think that would be cool.

[Lilymon]

this poem doesn't have a title yet, i haven't exactly been trying to think of one, but it's one of my newer poems. hope you all enjoy


Hiding from your eyes in a distant daze
As the night goes on and on.
Yearning for the dawn to come
When your presence would be gone.
Slowly falling into decay
As I wait throughout the night.
Trying so hard to stay awake
And not give in to fright.
Never seeming to catch my breath,
Though in stillness I may lie.
Never wanting to move a muscle
For fear that I may die.
Trapped within my conscious life,
A tear falls from my face.
Tring to find how it feels so right
When I know it's out of place.
I know nothing is as it should be
In this meaningless life I live.
I'm all used up and I'm all burned out,
I have nothing more to give.
Consumed in choking fear
As your voice sounds through the dark.
So attached to you I have become
Though love will never spark.
Searching hard for the reason
You have become my drug.
Wondering why when you torment me so
I can never get enough.
Wanting to make a sound
But being afraid to scream.
Never wanting to fall asleep
For fear of what i may dream.
Darkness is my lover,
And silence is my friend.
Trying so hard to understand
When this all will end.
Recapturing the images
That flash across my dreams.
Cowering from your haunting voice
...As I Cry Myself To Sleep...

[Lilymon]

New poems, though no one seems interested cuz...well no posts in forever. anyway, here's my newest one that i wrote last night.


Fading to the twilight as the sun dives to the deep.
Blinking away the nightmares as I fall to darking sleep.
Gazing at the planets in the black sky, drifting far.
Giving in to loneliness as I leap into the stars.
Tossing away my worries as I forget the day.
Wishing the peace of nighttime would forever stay.
Comparing the light of your love to the brightness of the moon.
Reminiscing all the times you used to make me swoon.
The coldness of the night chills me to the bone.
I sit here watching, waiting, wondering when you're coming home.
Why do you think it's right when I know that it's so wrong?
Why have you kept me in dark, waiting for so long?
Burning bright was our new love but died when the sun went down.
Wandering through my endless night wondering when you'll come around.
leaving you now with a heavy heart as I dive into the sky.
Dying at last with my love, the stars, as I whisper my goodbyes.